The Andrew Marr Show

Please tell me what you think and whether or not I should carry on! As always - constructive criticism is welcome.

Sorry about poor image quality - it's very fuzzy!

These are really good.

My only criticism is the 'Live' strap.
It looks wierd going all the way along.

I really like these.

not sure about this font though...

What about the font?

It looks flat and grainy.

I have a condensed version...?

The font is fine, but on the astons it's almost unreadable, and the 'MARR' also on the aston is different to the titles.

'THE ANDREW' and 'MARR SHOW' don't line up.

Als you don't want a Live aston that wide

I think it would look better, IMO.

Much better than the current titles, fits in more with the BBC News brand. The current titles somehow remind me of these:

http://cart.cranchs-sweetshop.co.uk/images/products/fruit_salad_chews.jpg

I cannot understand why this mock only has 2 stars! I love it its a massive improvement on the current graphics which reminds me of that god awful stripy wallpaper on daybreak.

Thanks for feedback What would you suggest though? Make it bigger?

People. I would like to improve this mock. I will start with the LIVE aston.
Is there anything else I need to do besides the points already here?

Thank you very much!