I'm afraid I can only echo AxG, Henry and Cavan's comments.
When was the last time BBC Sport looked like this?
http://hub.tv-ark.org.uk/images/sport/sport_images/bbc_idents/bbc_sport_ident_1997_b.jpg
Courtesy of TV Ark
Sorry but its a 1/5 from me.
Edit: Look at BBC and ITV's world cup titles. They scream out 'Brazil'. Especially the ITV one - so many references there.
Look at this year's Tour de France titles. The theme tune at least, screams France (slightly contrived, but hey) - this does not say France and it needs to. I'm sure most people won't understand the link between Bastille the band and Bastille the french festival. (if that's even intentional)
More thought, more creativity. You have not made anything. You've stuck some footage together. You've not even made the graphics. Even the audio has been cut weirdly. It doesn't flow.
Brekkie - I don't know what has been said here that is pedantic. Details matter.
Look, you need to spend time and give it thought. With respect, you've not really done much. And it doesn't have any skill.
You will get better. But that requires a bit more effort. Good luck, don't give up, but you need to spend time away and actually do something. Good luck.
Last edited by ASO on 4 August 2014 10:49pm - 2 times in total