The Wright Stuff

Perhaps you should spend a bit more time on it. Don't just do it in an evening.

Dragging up an old post, but I like this and feel it has potential.
The title card keeping the blue background is more of an evolution of the current design. The on screen graphics do look a lot tidier than current, and the lime colouring is a refreshing change.

Thank you, I do want to take this mock further, but I need some time to build a studio, and probably evolve the studio.