DayBreak UPDATE

Well I thought id have a go at designing a look for DayBreak!

Idea One:

Idea Two:

Idea Three:


Please let me know what you think! and how to improve!!
Thanks.

A bit too garish (tasteless) and almost American, it just doesn't seem friendly enough.

The graphics look excellent & great but I agree with the logo looking quite unfriendly

It isn't that bad. The best image is the best by far. Why not try to incorporate the new confirmed logo into your mock and try using the purple colour scheme.

All 3 of those are very impressive and I think would work my only thing is would it go with that purple logo which I think shouldant have been chose it should be a lot more like what yove created and that would definly give it that breakfast feel

I Agree

I don't like the font, and the fact you have used uppercase. Try using lowercase which seems more friendly, with a nice rounded font, something like the Daybreak font or This Morning font.

Thanks ill try and re- do them and show you what I come up with!

Like these, but agree you need to choose a softer font.

Also, think the images look more 'sunset' than sunrise for some reason?

Ok so here is the first up date! any more ideas or things you would like me to try?

Title:


ITV NEWS update:


So let me know what you think!! thanks

A vast improvement, but maybe you could try and use the actual Daybreak Logo

I think the news is more likely to look like this:

http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8408/daybreaknews.png

I hate all this tacky ITV News esque stuff coming through.