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Mixed metaphors and mangled expressions

(March 2004)

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SR
Sir Richard Rotcod
I am becoming more and more irritated by the poor literacy of those who write and read the news on TV (and radio for that matter).

Two examples from tonight:

"The clock is ticking down to" - er, clocks don't "tick down to" anything.

"and their dreams were left in shatters". I think you meant "left in tatters" dear. Or "dreams were shattered".

Any more?
:-(
A former member
In fact these examples don't really even deserve a place in any news script, even if corrected, because the best news writers don't use cliches.
BB
BBC unTALENT
kk posted:
In fact these examples don't really even deserve a place in any news script, even if corrected, because the best news writers don't use cliches.


Agreed they don't, it's usually sports presenters trying to look like they're in the know by using lockerroom talk...
PS
Psythor
kk posted:
In fact these examples don't really even deserve a place in any news script, even if corrected, because the best news writers don't use cliches.


Andrew Marr is a fantastic reporter, though. He once described Blair and friends like a wildlife documentary, which was hilarious, yet informative.
DV
dvboy
I could give you loads from SirenOnline news... if I actually bothered to listen properly anymore.
NE
Neil__
kk posted:
In fact these examples don't really even deserve a place in any news script, even if corrected, because the best news writers don't use cliches.

I looked before leaping into this discussion as I was worried that my comments might leave me teaching grandmothers how to suck eggs. However, I'll just grit my teeth, bite the bullet and talk the hind leg off a donkey while explaining that I could probably spout cliches till the cows come home.
I may be clutching at straws or possibly grasping nettles here.
Laughing

16 days later

LO
Londoner
Does anyone else hate the phrase "one year anniversary"?

Surely the correct phrase - in British English at least - is "first anniversary"?

I was surprised to hear the former version used in the headlines just now on News 24/World

Even if "x year anniversary" is firmly entrenched in US English, the use of the word "year" is redundant
:-(
A former member
I think that these mangled metaphors should be rolled out across a level playing field more often.
DE
deejay
It's true that all News Journalists are advised to avoid cliche at all times, but it's amazing how often they "creep in" (to use another cliche!) to news scripts. Often it seems, a journalist will bash the script together intending to revise it later, but doesn't get the chance. Of course the Editors of programmes are supposed to approve scripts before they make it to air and if another journalist is given the job of reading the script live, then they may well revise it themselves. But famously things do "slip through the net " (and another!).

My favourite, although not an example of cliche but rather one of lack of copy checking, was when a story about a steel strike in South Wales began with the words, "There were scenes of delight in Port Talbot tonight, as the news of the settlement spread." Say it aloud and you'll see just how silly that sounded on the radio !

That's taken from Will Wyatt's book "The Fun Factory", which is a good read and an interesting insight into the workings of Television Centre in the 70s and beyond.

43 days later

LO
Londoner
Mark Webster's report on ITV News has just described Col Bob Stewart as a "former veteran of Kosovo".

How can you be a former veteran?
NH
Nick Harvey Founding member
Presumably it's only "former veterans" who can "return again"!
KA
Katherine Founding member
LET OFF STEAM MODE: Please can news people STOP using the nonsensical 'sex up', 'free up' and 'hearts and minds' too!!

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