UB
The issue with your title sequence is that it feels very 'broken'. The current titles have a narrative of Phil and Holly on their way to the studio where they meet. This shows that but with a lot of seemingly random footage of London interspersed.
As for the logo, it's decent but it is very basic and doesn't need to be on screen for 7 seconds at the start. It might look better with some animation such as if it were to fade in.
EDIT - Don't edit the original post and delete it. No one will be able to understand what we're talking about.
As for the logo, it's decent but it is very basic and doesn't need to be on screen for 7 seconds at the start. It might look better with some animation such as if it were to fade in.
EDIT - Don't edit the original post and delete it. No one will be able to understand what we're talking about.
JO
Indeed. Extremely annoying.
EDIT - Don't edit the original post and delete it. No one will be able to understand what we're talking about.
Indeed. Extremely annoying.