JO
I don't know what you're trying to make here. If you're trying to create something you could imagine seeing on TV today then I'm afraid it's a poor attempt. For a start the music is very much of it's time I'm not sure if anything could be done to make it sound right for today. If it's got panpipes in it's going sound dated.
If you're trying to pay homage to the original show, then don't use the logo they're using for this new programme as it's very much a product of modern day design.
The sequence you've made is quite nice as are the visuals, but it doesn't work just plunked in the middle of the GMB logo they just don't feel right together. I don't get why you would to shoot such sequence and only use a small part of the screen, it's just using the shape for the sake of using it.
I don't want to sound too negative your original video was well produced despite the Windows Movie Maker handicap and it's not too different to what we got from the original Daybreak minus the dated music. I suspect what we see on Monday will be nothing like it though simply because it's too similar to Daybreak.
Have had a bit more time to play now, and have worked the new logo into things:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKzeXmVqdvs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKzeXmVqdvs
I don't know what you're trying to make here. If you're trying to create something you could imagine seeing on TV today then I'm afraid it's a poor attempt. For a start the music is very much of it's time I'm not sure if anything could be done to make it sound right for today. If it's got panpipes in it's going sound dated.
If you're trying to pay homage to the original show, then don't use the logo they're using for this new programme as it's very much a product of modern day design.
The sequence you've made is quite nice as are the visuals, but it doesn't work just plunked in the middle of the GMB logo they just don't feel right together. I don't get why you would to shoot such sequence and only use a small part of the screen, it's just using the shape for the sake of using it.
I don't want to sound too negative your original video was well produced despite the Windows Movie Maker handicap and it's not too different to what we got from the original Daybreak minus the dated music. I suspect what we see on Monday will be nothing like it though simply because it's too similar to Daybreak.
Last edited by Jon on 24 April 2014 7:06pm - 6 times in total