GMTV opening mock!

One star out of five seems like quite a high rating...

Sorry, but it's pretty awful. Or awful.

A static slideshow of randomly chosen photos from Google Images added to an unbearable sound (you can't call that music) and an uninspired, rather odd logo is really poor.

Constructive feedback: try not to do the above.

Ok then if you say I should say what I can and can't do, I have crap software which doesn't let you animate and don't know what else I could use!?, I thought the logo I designed was pretty good but obviously not & I don't know how to sort the music! Ok I'm not a professional mock artist, I just thought it was pretty fun. Any feedback welcomed!

Start by improving your stills, when you've reached a decent level then move onto video mocks.

The most important thing to remember is to take your time. Taking regular intervals to evaluate your work will help: compare it to real world examples, see where it can be improved and correct any obvious mistakes. Only then should you consider posting.

The best mocks aren't made in an hour, or even a day. No-one expects you to be at anything approaching professional level, especially when you're just starting out but your development would be aided greatly by listening to advice and making an effort to improve your skills.