GMTV Mock

Title
http://img98.imageshack.us/i/titlew.png/

Clock (without Ticker)
http://img181.imageshack.us/i/gmtvdogsingle.png/

Clock (with Ticker)
http://img181.imageshack.us/i/gmtvdogwithticker.png/

Coming Up
http://img98.imageshack.us/i/comingup.png/

Locations
http://img232.imageshack.us/i/crosspresenterlocation.png/

GMTV News Background
http://img181.imageshack.us/i/gmtvnewspresenter.png/

GMTV Weather Background
http://img181.imageshack.us/i/gmtvweatherstart.png/

GMTV With Lorraine Titles
http://img98.imageshack.us/i/gmtvwithlorrainetitle.png/

So what do you think?

This is my first attempt on making a mock.

2/5
Good Attempt for your first mock

First attempt or poor atttempt. Sorry, please make it 16:9, Use an anti-aliased font. Make it smarter. It looks like you have made in in PowerPoint or Paint.

I used a program called Paint.Net
I do admit that it could be a little bit better.
I am now making a updated version of it

I suppose it would be better if there was something better than the gradient background.

Nice but the text next to the GMTV Logo's are kinda bland, and more detail would look better

Jaggy, be honest, it's tragic.

stop bein so cruel, its his first attempt

That doesn't make it any good though.

People shouldn't post their 'first attempts' if they're like this.