The Gallery

BBC One

Look at this! This isn't a bad mock. (January 2017)

This site closed in March 2021 and is now a read-only archive
CN
ClarkNarvas

Made a ident using Hitfilm 4 Express and Microsoft Powerpoint. This is what BBC Oneness should have been like.
Last edited by ClarkNarvas on 7 January 2017 9:17pm
JO
Josh
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!
CN
ClarkNarvas
JoshX posted:
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!

Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.
JO
Josh
ClarkToasti posted:
JoshX posted:
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!

Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.
CN
ClarkNarvas
JoshX posted:
ClarkToasti posted:
JoshX posted:
I like it! Although, the skidmark-like lines are a bit confusing. If you removed them and put the oneness logo, it would be perfect!

Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.

I'm doing it on the moon ident but that's about it for now.
CN
ClarkNarvas
ClarkToasti posted:
JoshX posted:
ClarkToasti posted:
Thanks, I'd appreciate it if you rated my work as it's saying that this was a bad mock. Here's version 2 for you.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBsgIm4fgVg


That's normal. The rating is the average and if lots of people but a high rating (like I did) it will have a high rating.

I love it! Would love to see it in more ident forms.

I'm doing it on the moon ident but that's about it for now.


Just made the moon ident
DW
DavidWhitfield
I like these. Certainly an improvement upon the current proper 'Oneness' ones. Nice job.
JO
Josh
The 'ness' in oneness is barely visible when the logo forms.
CN
ClarkNarvas
JoshX posted:
The 'ness' in oneness is barely visible when the logo forms.

Ill improve it once the morning comes.
BR
Brekkie
Well the logo is prominent and the idents have a common theme both visually and in the soundtrack.

So that's completely unacceptable for BBC1 in 2017.
CN
ClarkNarvas
JoshX posted:
The 'ness' in oneness is barely visible when the logo forms.

Fixed it on this version
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_L16dIBlX0&feature=youtu.be

Brekkie posted:
Well the logo is prominent and the idents have a common theme both visually and in the soundtrack.

So that's completely unacceptable for BBC1 in 2017.

Just made a bumper which adopts the proper Oneness concept.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OAbhrQwBIk&feature=youtu.be
JO
Josh
Love it! Apart from the Helicopter ident (which I know how) how did you get the idents without the logo?

Newer posts