Black_Mock_UPDATE

This Mock for Express News English Edition
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/newz_at_ten_copy1.jpg
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/intro.gif
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/current_issue.jpg
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/express_kids.jpg
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/newz_at_ten.jpg
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/music.jpg
http://www.rp-network.com/tvforum/uploads/weather_new_theme..jpg

It's a start, but there's only one thing there and not much to see.

It looks OK, but I don't really know what it's about.

I think somebody is going to say
"How long till the end of the summer holidays"

Please read the sticky threads at the top of the Mocks Forum.

No, because we know you come here even when it's not the summer holidays.

Spotted a spelling mistake - 'difference' has three 'E's

I can't see BSKYB Taking kindly to you using their font either.


And, looking at these mocks. What is Office 2007like? I'm thinking of upgrading.

thanks
but i m trying ....ur comments very helpfully for me
Thanks again

Some of this text is far too small and you'll never see it unless you have a really big TV. If I can't read it on my computer screen without squinting and moving closer, you'll never see it on a real TV.

How long till the end of the summer holidays?

Text too small, text too hard to read (especially the high temperatures), text in two languages, spelling mistakes. Too much shading and bevelled effects, using a font made for Sky, too much non consistency between graphics and the sidebar, and the most of the information is outside of the safe areas.