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I'm still not convinced. As others have already told you countless times, the font you've used for "NEWS" would simply never be considered for use on-screen - that "W" looks awkward and rather like two overlapping "V"s. Good designers tend to work with clean, simple and easily readable fonts that still look visually appealing.
As for the title shots: well, there's not a lot of feedback to offer here. I actually think it looks worse than the current Breakfast title sequence. Those rings look too thick, out of proportion and rather like a ribcage.
All in all your mocks are a poor retooling of the current BBC News clunkiness rather than a fresh new solution.
As for the title shots: well, there's not a lot of feedback to offer here. I actually think it looks worse than the current Breakfast title sequence. Those rings look too thick, out of proportion and rather like a ribcage.
All in all your mocks are a poor retooling of the current BBC News clunkiness rather than a fresh new solution.