Channel 4 Ident/Break Bumper Concept (3D Test)

Hello everyone, I'm just learning to do 3D animation and I've decided to do a Channel 4 ident idea.

I based it off of the idea of wooden building bricks and dominoes.

Please tell me what you think and if you can, give me some advice. I know that my design is not the best.

It's more of a sting, than an ident.

You need something a bit longer (duration) for it to be an ident. That's more like a sting. The idea is interesting but as it stands it isn't an ident.

Not much to see here but a respectable start - certainly not worthy of being faded out. It's just you need to go a bit further with it really before sharing it.

Hello, I'm back!
I had issues logging in so I've made a fresh new account.

I've been reading your comments and I do agree that is more like a sting than an ident.

I'll keep them in mind