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It doesn't look bad as it is, I'm only talking about a minor change. If this were my mock, I'd align the headline/supporting text as per the tag (e.g. "BREAKING NEWS" or "NEW THIS MORNING") to the left.
For example:
Just looks a bit nicer to my eye, and allows for an easier read for the viewer due to the increase in space around the text, allowing it all to breathe a bit more.
It's your mock, though. Ultimately, I'm just some toerag sticking my oar in. Progress your work as per your desires, not mine!
You're exactly right there! Design is as much about form as it is function and it is much easier to read with that separation 😊
Oh yes, the text spacing in the strap is a little too close, good spot!
It doesn't look bad as it is, I'm only talking about a minor change. If this were my mock, I'd align the headline/supporting text as per the tag (e.g. "BREAKING NEWS" or "NEW THIS MORNING") to the left.
For example:

Just looks a bit nicer to my eye, and allows for an easier read for the viewer due to the increase in space around the text, allowing it all to breathe a bit more.
It's your mock, though. Ultimately, I'm just some toerag sticking my oar in. Progress your work as per your desires, not mine!
You're exactly right there! Design is as much about form as it is function and it is much easier to read with that separation 😊